November 25, 2016 at 6:24 pm

I Miss You More

In the distance it seems you, I see

Waving hands so joyfully

I wave back desperately

For there is no surety if it is you

Then suddenly the image faints

I am so reluctant and amazed

While having on that thinking

I see flashes of lightning

I look up the sky; I see clouds forming your name

The more that I feel the ache

Is this a game seeing your name in the sky?

Rain drops evading the show

Now everything is gone even the shadow

That holds yesterday

I feel my heart squeezes and twists

Tears fall for I miss you more

Come back to me and love me again.

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November 25, 2016 at 8:55 pm

It is a nice poem on love and love separation but  I think Cely you also have lost love but do not worry you will find one your lost love labor lost. wanna write ‘I miss you’ on a rock and throw at your face so you know how much it hurts to miss you.

Some mornings still feel like the night before. I’m just waiting for the days I don’t miss you anymore. Sometimes, when one person is missing, the whole world seems depopulated.

If I could plant a flower for every time I miss you, I could walk through my garden forever.

A thousand words couldn’t bring you back… I know this because I tried, neither could a thousand tears… I know this because I cried, you left behind a broken heart and happy memories too…but I never wanted memories…I only wanted you.

November 26, 2016 at 5:22 pm

jhsayyar, Yeah, I had lost love, the love I cannot forget. The love of him is like a treasure for I did feel deep in my heart how love beats for him. Yes, I should have not poured all trust and feeling for him. I should have been wise enough not to give my 100% trust so I will not dive onto the deepest pain of a broken dream

Yes, love is so beautiful, yet when we are cheated the world may turn upside down and the mind cannot function well to console the heart.yes, we all know the feeling is temporary for our heart becomes weaker and requires the self to relax for a moment and find the cause of breakup and solution to repair the soonest the broken dream.

I been a victim of a false love I thought real. I am just human subject to fall in love. There are many deceitful persons this time. They are not worth to live in this world for they are killers to those whose love is genuine and  ready to gamble life’s obstacles. Oh, love.

I am like a lonely rose hiding in a lonesome rock.

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