May 27, 2016 at 8:32 am

All my posts go live but some are rated less than my expectations

Let’s learn from each other

If you were to assess my following blog what would be your rating. I will not tell you how LB rated it.

http://172.104.9.193/breaking-news-skin-whitener/

This is very informal – no obligation whatsoever.

May 27, 2016 at 8:51 am

@bestwriter/I just read your post

These are my opinion:

1) Your title isn’t a killer title. No wonder I don’t see any comments. Sorry this may sound hurtful but killer titles work out well . I would suggest it should be  “Beauty Review-Radyance Skin Brightening Complex

2) the featured picture isn’t convincing and not a stand out. Maybe you can find out freedigitalphotos.net, morguefile for skin product related images

How much did you earned? 22 cents?

Me too.

🙂

May 27, 2016 at 9:02 am

Constructive criticism is always welcome.Thanks. As I have mentioned in my post I will not reveal how much I earned for this post.

That image was inserted by Admin. What I wanted to insert did not get uploaded.

May 27, 2016 at 9:32 am

@peachpurple.  About receiving comments I have checked other blogs here and many do not get comments.

May 27, 2016 at 10:49 am

@bestwriter I read it last night and thought it should bring good views for the site but be honest and tell me how many views it brought for you! If you shared it on Social media and got /brought visitors then my account js having kinda glitch because I was getting 15-20 views every post which has come down to zero since 23 May. I will give you 4/5 for your post.

May 27, 2016 at 1:29 pm

@suny Thanks. Honestly I do not even know where to look for views.

May 27, 2016 at 1:55 pm

@bestwriter you can see all your points in History on your Profile, and referral views as well. I usually share some links a few times per day and gain around 30 referral visits an each.

But I only share a few times per day, in the morning, evening and when I am closing down.

Is there a max per day maybe?

May 27, 2016 at 2:48 pm

@Rapid Blue You are right, actually I was not doing it the right way. I changed my tactics a bit and I succeeded bring close to 50 views for my 3 tweets.

May 27, 2016 at 3:38 pm

@sunil I will assume you forgot to place http:// in front of the personalized link.

Yes, well, you are not the only one…

May 27, 2016 at 3:48 pm

I think you’ve got some rather good, concrete information about the product. That is something I often find lacking in posts on health and beauty topics, so big points for that. But I noticed a number of small typographical errors, such as “mor” instead of “more.”

There were also places where punctuation could have improved the readability. Here’s an example: “Looking at a celebrity’s before and after picture scores of celebrities have gone in for this treatment – something brand new and never heard of before.” This actually feels like a sentence fragment tacked to the beginning of a sentence.

Looking at your source, you’ll notice there is a great deal more urgency and emotion in that article, both in the title and the body text. This isn’t necessarily the kind of piece that would appeal to me as a reader, but a lot of others do go for that and it rates well with the search engines. I also think that using specific case studies helped that article because it gives the reader people to identify with. In your post, you simply mentioned the generic “celebrities,” and I kept wondering who?

It’s a good, solid post. It could use a bit of proofreading and more length. Adding a hint of emotion to the headline could be helpful, and a bit more specificity about people who are getting results from the product would be great if you can do it without simply paraphrasing the source.

May 27, 2016 at 3:55 pm

@Rapid Blue No, I had to make a minor modification in the link that appeared after clicking at ‘Twitter’ I used my entire ref-link in place of what was pre-loaded on that link. The number of views from my three tweets have brought more than 80 by now and still counting.

May 27, 2016 at 3:59 pm

I submitted one 500 words long post, ‘Top third party commenting systems’.

I used a few tools to fix it – Grammarly, Paperrater, some grammar pages and a bit of SEO tools.

I also make sure to contains a lots of easy to understand information, so it is not robotic or confusing.

It took me a whole morning to produce it. I also created a custom featured image for that post.

Now, let’s see how much more I will get for that post which took me a lots of time and effort in comparison to my average post which I just write in one stroke of a keyboard.

May 27, 2016 at 4:06 pm

@ruby3881.

Typos many a time go unnoticed no matter how many times  we read them.

I too feel it is a strong post where many would be interested in the product and because of that  alone I expected a good rating. (sad)

Since I quoted that link I thought readers would get more details there.

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May 27, 2016 at 5:30 pm

@Rapid Blue In response to your how many times should you share – as long your followers find them worth  visiting that should be fine but you must have noticed that your second tweet brings lesser views because some of them are repeat visitors thus do not count as unique visitors.

May 27, 2016 at 5:38 pm

@sunil I only noticed that visitors are pretty much random. As the time lapse between my tweets differs, it is always a different number of the visits.