Very nice. Good thinking towards religion. Hope Indian people follow the same.

“Kanimozhi is very happy today.
She dreamt of this day for almost thirty years.

At the same time, she is little sad.
Sad, because her only child Rashmi will get married today
and will live separately with her husband in another town.

For last twenty five yearsRashmi was her world,
her hope, her life line.
She is anxious too, because, being the only parent of Rashmi,
Kanimozhi has to take all the responsibilities related to the marriage.

Kanimozhi dreamt about this day long back,
it’s matching with her dreams, almost everything.
Rashmi – a self-dependent, well-educated Indian girl,
like what she has thought about her child.
Still, a mother isalways a mother.
These all together made Kanimozhihappy,
anxious and sad at the single moment.”
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Hello, Ich, if I may call you by that name.

I like your story, it was going somewhere,
but I suggest you write in shorter sentences,
that way, your reader’s eyes find it easier to follow.

Love overcomes all things,
particularly things of religion,
and you were able to express that notion well.

Shorten your story,
because after all,
blogging is short stories, and not novels.

Also, make sure that you have spaces between
all of your words, in case you are writing too fast.

Just feedback and honest criticism from a friend.

Have a great day, and keep writing!

Moses Reyes

I wish I could go back and do some more editing on your story.

Is there an editing feature here?

If you haven’t tasted yuca leaves, why not try if you are from a tropical county? These leaves could be good supplement from other vegetables you believe so expensive. I think there are cassava plantations and I doubt if people the harvesters know about the benefits of cassava leaves. i have not eaten these leave, I may try, but there is problem, I cannot find them here in the city where I leave. They are mostly planted in Bukidnon and other parts in in the Philippines.

Love cassava chips. Have never eaten cassava leaves but would be happy to try them. I have come to realize that there are many leaves that people in other countries eat that I could have been enjoying too. I just didn’t know they were edible. You just added cassava leaves to my list of edible leaves.

I love cassava roots, it has low glycemic index though it too, have so much carbohydrates. But I have not tasted the leaves. Will try sometime.

@Treathyl FOX , That is nice you like cassava chips.I have not seen in our city malls and stores cassava chips. How nice of you liking to taste the taste of cassava leaves. My sister told me that those leaves are edible.

Cooked cassava is nice if cook them fresh for if cook dried already, it becomes toxic. Those dried are good for cassava flour and others. The young leaves called the cassava tops are most edible and great source for Vitamin K.Vitamin K is a protector for a deadly cancer.