November 1, 2016 at 2:16 am

I would like to share you my poem. I hope you will be inspired or motivated,LOL.

 Just Close Your Eyes

Just simply close your eyes
There you will find peace
You’ll see only void space
It relaxes and sets you free
If you are still in trouble
Though eyes closed
This means your mind is wandering

Make yourself empty with worries
This is the best way to forget tomorrow
This is the best remedy to smash yesterday
You’ll find the instant peace when close your eyes
Sometimes you’ll see images
They are like part of your existence
If tolerated life becomes in trouble

Close your eyes to feel how your heart beats
Listen to how it sinks in its small space
That small space is the entire holder of life
It breaks when we are lost in our way
Give justice to your life
Empty the shell that keeps on hurting you
Connect the feeling to your inner soul
It will surely dictate to release all pangs of life

Let happiness be seen while closing your eyes
In this temporal seconds of closing
Is where you can find peace and see the better you.

Photos taken In Cornwall park, Auckland

November 1, 2016 at 7:04 pm

The poem is beautiful but its imagery and diction is not good as must be in the poem that motivates human emotion. Keep in mind poetry teaches and delight is the main function of a poem.

It is about peace the poet says close your eyes you will find peace and rest but when you will open eyes the situation will be the same. Read these lines carefull

November 2, 2016 at 1:34 am

@ jhsayyar, Can you share us here your own poems? I am writing a poem based on my feelings and experience. I just want to express what I feel. Share yours here. I have written 700 articles mixed short stories and poems, and had been the editor of our local magazine in region X in Mindanao, and many more sites like Triond, Wikinut, Applewood Consultancy, Bubblews, Mylot, Mykites,Freelance and Indeed.

I Think This Is You

I think this is you
Curly hair, smiling eyes and lover of beauty
Your secret name reveals your real you
During moonlit night, you are restless
You cannot avoid recalling the beauty of yesterday
When the moon goes abroad, you sigh in vain
For darkness envelops the universe
You always want to keep the love of yours
While the moon is smiling at you in mockery
It wants to say yesterday is gone tomorrow is here
So smart moon that it changes its aura
There is always smile in your lips when past is revealed
By your wild imagination and rocky feeling
When the morning comes, it’s the sun that smiles at you

It entertains your presence and slaps your past
Nature cannot condemn you of your decision
To keep the shadow of yesterday
It is in the past where you sustain your strength
Yesterday is beauty and today is the semblance of your being
For without yesterday, today is useless
It may rot in the history of time
But it remains fresh and inspiring
Without yesterday, your true love today
May not come to you and build a very strong edifice with you.
This is your love that comes to you in a mysterious way.

AUTHOR: ERLY E. MAGLANGIT, PH.D

This poem is dedicated to my ex bf.

I love you goodbye!!!

November 2, 2016 at 1:49 am

To all readers: I am only writing for my own pleasure, should you be pleased, you are free to feel it,LOL. Do share yours should you have written poems too. You are also free to read my short stories published here in blogs. You may like them.

Thanks

IN THE NAME OF LOVE

AUTHOR: ERLY E. MAGLANGIT,PH.D

In the name of love,

I will traverse the high mountains,

I will kill your enemies.

I will send all my warriors hiding

within the treasure of my feeling.

I am your lady, yet I could explore the worst,

In the name of love.

If you will be behind me,

I am going to shelter you with my wings.

Let us fly to nowhere and no one dares to hurt you and me

Where there is a sharp rock,

I will engrave onto it,

A promise that will never fade and rust.

In the name of love,

I am willing to be your prisoner.

Call me anything and that is me.

That is how love must be to have inner peace.

Love must not be in disgrace.

If you are in my shadow,

I will always shelter you.

I do not have the power.

It is only love that is always made stronger

There is nothing impossible,

In the name of love.

Love is love…..